Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
We can learn if we do bad things we must get bad situation.
Also, if we do good things we must get good situation.
Another things we have to work or live diligent.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
You\'ve got a point here. Sure, if we do bad stuff, things might go south. On the flip side, doing good things usually brings good vibes. Plus, it\'s smart to work or live diligently for a smooth ride.
Nice work, Henry!
~ Teacher Maxine ^^
We can learn if we do bad things we must get bad situation.
>> We can learn that if we do bad things, we may face negative consequences.
Also, if we do good things we must get good situation.
>> Similarly, if we do good things, we can expect positive outcomes.
Another things we have to work or live diligent.
>> Another thing is that we have to work or live diligently.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.