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I spend my most of time in my room. I study in my room, I sleep in my room and I play in my room. I usually in my bed when I chill. Also, I usually like to play the piano and I have a piano in my room, so I think I always in my room execpt I take a meal
강사 첨삭
Hello dear Lina!
Thank you for your effort in writing today. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I spend my most of time in my room.
>>I spend most of my time in my room.
I study in my room, I sleep in my room and I play in my room.
>>CORRECT!
I usually in my bed when I chill.
>>I am usually in my bed when I chill.
Also, I usually like to play the piano and I have a piano in my room, so I think I always in my room execpt I take a meal.
>>Also, I usually like to play the piano and I have a piano in my room. So, I think I am always in my room except when I have my meals.
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