Homework
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Q: What are the disadvantages of having a lot of toys?
A: I think it\'s lack of space in the house.
If there are a lot of toys, and they don\'t have a toy room, there would be so many toys in the child\'s room and there will be lack of space.
Also, when the children are older, they should throw away their toys.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If there are a lot of toys, and they don\'t have a toy room, there would be so many toys in the child\'s room and there will be lack of space.
3. Also, when the children are older, they should throw away their toys.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I think it\'s lack of space in the house.
>>CORRECT!
2. If there are a lot of toys, and they don\'t have a toy room, there would be so many toys in the child\'s room and there will be lack of space.
>>If there are a lot of toys but there is no toy room, there would be so many toys in the child\'s room and there will be lesser space to use.
3. Also, when the children are older, they should throw away their toys.
>>CORRECT!
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