Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have to choose the strength of English.
I am not sure , But I like studying English reading best and its listening is the worst.
But most of all I want to improve my English speaking.
Because that was my dream since I was 20years old.
When I go to abroad I want to express what I want to .Like asking and requiring.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Ms. [이름]ny!
Read your homework and I suggested some sentences there so that your next sentences are still connected with the first one. Kindly go over it and see if it helps you express yourself better. Have a good day!
T. Aki~
If I have to choose the strength of English.
>>> If I have to choose the strength of English, that wold be reading.
I am not sure, But I like studying English reading best and its listening is the worst.
>>> I am not sure but I enjoy reading and listening is the least.
But most of all I want to improve my English speaking.
>>> However, I want to improve my fluency in English.
Because that was my dream since I was 20years old.
>>> Because that has ben my dream since I was 20 years old.
When I go to abroad I want to express what I want to .Like asking and requiring.
>>> When I go abroad I want to express what I want like asking or inquiring.
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