Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
On a gloomy day, negative thoughts come to mind.
So I have to do something. four things I do on a gloomy day.
1. Going out for a walk (including a walk with a dog)
I was able to see the scenery, breathe outside air, and see people while walking.
2. Stretching or exercising.
3. I meet acquaintance or talk to friends on the phone.
4. I look around the city or go shopping.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing the things that you do on a gloomy day, Mia! You did a job well done. ^^ For me, I sleep and eat on a gloomy day but I think what you do on gloomy days are better than what I do.
-Khai
On a gloomy day, negative thoughts come to mind.
>> CORRECT
So I have to do something. four things I do on a gloomy day.>> So I have to do something. These are the four things that I do on a gloomy day.
1. Going out for a walk (including a walk with a dog)>> CORRECT
OR
>> I go out for a walk and I also walk my dog.
I was able to see the scenery, breathe outside air, and see people while walking.>> By doing this, I am able to see scenery, breathe the air outside, and look around while people are walking.
2. Stretching or exercising.>> Stretching or exercising
OR
>> I do some stretching or exercise.
3. I meet acquaintance or talk to friends on the phone.>> I meet acquaintances or talk to friends on the phone.
4. I look around the city or go shopping.>> CORRECT
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