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2024-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Maxine

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I think fairy tales is good for children.Because like I said before fairy tales can give positive impact for children. Other things it is good for children to read books, but almost books are difficult and boring to children, however fairy tales is easy and fun. Fairy tales has lessons and easy and funny. It is very good for children.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Henry!

Good job! I think you have a point. Unlike many other books that might be difficult and boring for them, fairy tales are both easy and fun. They not only provide entertainment but also valuable lessons in an easy and enjoyable manner. It\'s a fantastic way to engage children in reading and learning.

~ Teacher Maxine

I think fairy tales is good for children.

>> I think fairy tales are good for children.

Because like I said before fairy tales can give positive impact for children.

>> As I mentioned earlier, fairy tales can have a positive impact on children.

Other things it is good for children to read books, but almost books are difficult and boring to children, however fairy tales is easy and fun.

>>While it is beneficial for children to read various types of books, many can be difficult and boring for them. In contrast, fairy tales are often easy to understand and fun.

Fairy tales has lessons and easy and funny.

>> Fairy tales have lessons and are easy and enjoyable.

It is very good for children.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is highly beneficial for children.

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