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My paternal grandparents and maternal grandfather died before I was born.
My maternal grandmother died of COVID-19 in 2022. She was 104 years old then.
When I was [이름] I went to the bathhouse with maternal grandmother. I visited she\'s house she gave me pocket money.
When maternal grandmother was alive, my mother called her every day.
I also try to call my mom once a day.
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Hello Mia! Thank you for sharing your personal experience. It\'s really good to reminisce memories with our grandparents. ^^
-Khai
My paternal grandparents and maternal grandfather died before I was born.
>> CORRECT
My maternal grandmother died of COVID-19 in 2022.>> My maternal grandmother died of COVID-19 in 2022.
OR
>> My maternal grandmother died of COVID-19 last 2022.
She was 104 years old then.
>> She was 104 years old at that time.
When I was [이름] I went to the bathhouse with maternal grandmother.>>When I was [이름], I went to the bathhouse with my maternal grandmother.
I visited she\'s house she gave me pocket money.
>> I visited her house and she gave me pocket money.
When maternal grandmother was alive, my mother called her every day.>> When my maternal grandmother was alive, my mother called her every day.
OR
>> My mother called my grandmother every day when she was still alive.
I also try to call my mom once a day.>> CORRECT
OR
>> I also try to call my mom every day.
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