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Q: Do you think books will be totally replaced with gadgets in the future? Why do you think so?
A: I think it could be replaced with gadgets in the future.
It\'s because there are some books that can be read online today, and it\'s basically the same thing with a book except it\'s on screen.
But I think there are some disadvantages of screen, so I think it might not be totally replaced.
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2. It\'s because there are some books that can be read online today, and it\'s basically the same thing with a book except it\'s on screen.
3. But I think there are some disadvantages of screen, so I think it might not be totally replaced.
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Here are some notes for consideration:
1. I think it could be replaced with gadgets in the future.
>>CORRECT!
2. It\'s because there are some books that can be read online today, and it\'s basically the same thing with a book except it\'s on screen.
>>CORRECT!
3. But I think there are some disadvantages of screen, so I think it might not be totally replaced.
>>However, I think there are disadvantages in using the screen at all times, so it might not be totally replaced.
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