Homework
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Q: What is the best game that students like you should play? Why do you think so?
A: I\'m not sure but I think it can be Minecraft.
It\'s because actually some people use Minecraft in education and there are a lot of contents that can be educational to students.
Also I think it\'s much less violent compared to other games that teens play.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. It\'s because actually some people use Minecraft in education and there are a lot of contents that can be educational to students.
3. Also I think it\'s much less violent compared to other games that teens play.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I\'m not sure but I think it can be Minecraft.
>>I think it\'s Minecraft.
2. It\'s because actually some people use Minecraft in education and there are a lot of contents that can be educational to students.
>>Some people use Minecraft in education and there are a lot of contents that can be educational to students.
3. Also I think it\'s much less violent compared to other games that teens play.
>>Also, I think it\'s much less violent compared to other games that teens play.
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