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As long as you\'re not too obsessed with your appearance, I don\'t think being thin is a bad thing. Confidence starts from appearance, so it seems like you have to pay some attention to it.
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Good morning, eliana!
I totally agree with you. Loving oneself is the most important thing to subdue those insecurities. We were all uniquly created. there is no such thing as one is more beautiful than the other.
Have a good day!
T. Aki~
As long as you\'re not too obsessed with your appearance, I don\'t think being thin is a bad thing.
>>> CORRECT!
Confidence starts from appearance, so it seems like you have to pay some attention to it.
>>> CORRECT!
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