Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I meet my frieds, I ask where a delicious restaurant is, and I look at the internet to see ifr there is a local restaurant.
I also talk about the place I traveled to . Sometimes fine now things I did not know. and I feel good.
I have more time to talk on the phone than to meet and chitchat.
강사 첨삭
Nice work, Mia. ^^ You were able to share the things that you chitchat with your friends. I\'ve corrected a few things (spelling and punctuation) on your homework.
-Khai
When I meet my frieds, I ask where a delicious restaurant is, and I look at the internet to see ifr there is a local restaurant.
>> When I meet my friends, I ask where a delicious restaurant is, and I look at the internet to see if there is a local restaurant.
I also talk about the place I traveled to .>> I also talk about the place I traveled to.
Sometimes fine now things I did not know. and I feel good.
Sometimes I also look for things that I do not know, and I feel good.
I have more time to talk on the phone than to meet and chitchat.>> CORRECT
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>> I have more time to talk on the phone than to meet them personally and chitchat.
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