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2024-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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There are so many dishes I like. Korean food is variety and delicious. The dishes I often cook at home are kimchi stew, bean paste stew and seaweed soup. Kimchi stew can be eaten every day. I also like to eat pork belly, noodles and spaghetti. Breakfast is simple to eat I sometimes eat toast.

강사 첨삭

You did well in sharing your favorite dishes, Mia! ^^ I also like pork belly and spaghetti!  I agree that Korean food is delicious.
-Khai

There are so many dishes I like. 

>> CORRECT

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>> There are so many dishes that I like. 

Korean food is variety and delicious.

>> Korean food has a wide variety and is delicious.

The dishes I often cook at home are kimchi stew, bean paste stew and seaweed soup. 

>> The dishes I often cook at home are kimchi stew, bean paste stew, and seaweed soup.

Kimchi stew can be eaten every day.

>> CORRECT

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>> Kimchi stew can be eaten every day and I usually eat it.

I also like to eat pork belly, noodles and spaghetti. 

>> I also like to eat pork belly, noodles, and spaghetti.

Breakfast is simple to eat I sometimes eat toast.

>> Breakfast is simple to eat. I sometimes eat toast for breakfast.


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