Homework
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Q: What are the benefits of curfew?
A: I think the best benefit of curfew is the person can be safe.
I think usually more crimes occurs at night, so if teens or kids cannot go outside during it\'s dark, they\'ll less get hurt.
For parents, they can have more time with their children, and that can make the bonds between them stronger.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework!
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Here are some things to consider:
1. I think the best benefit of curfew is the person can be safe.
>>I think the best benefit of curfew is that the person can be safe.
2. I think usually more crimes occurs at night, so if teens or kids cannot go outside during it\'s dark, they\'ll less get hurt.
>>Usually, more crimes occur at night, so if teens or kids cannot go outside when it\'s dark, they\'ll get hurt less.
3. For parents, they can have more time with their children, and that can make the bonds between them stronger.
>>CORRECT!
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