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I agree with Anna\'s opinion.Because I want to learn many things and develop myself. Then I want to choose my own path.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
I see you\'re on the same page as Anna. Learning and self-development are really important. Choosing our own path is what makes the journey exciting!
~ Teacher Maxine
I agree with Anna\'s opinion.Because I want to learn many things and develop myself.
>> I agree with Anna\'s opinion because I want to learn many things and develop myself.
Then I want to choose my own path.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Then, I want to chart my own course.
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