homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t like stay home to spend free time. I’m trying to go outside like cafe.
If I go to cafe I’m doing study english or read a book.
Actually I can do it very well, Just I’m trying something..
Than I think I had a good today! that’s all :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Su! Thank you for writing your composition. Cafes are a good place to read a book and study.
If I go to cafe I’m doing study english or read a book.
Actually I can do it very well, Just I’m trying something..
-T.JAMIE
I don’t like stay home to spend free time.
>> I don\'t like to stay home to spend free time.
I’m trying to go outside like cafe.
>> I\'m trying to go outside, like to a cafe.
If I go to cafe I’m doing study english or read a book.
>> If I go to a cafe, I either study English or read a book.
Actually I can do it very well, Just I’m trying something..
>> Actually, I can do it very well. I\'m just trying something different/new.
Than I think I had a good today! that’s all :)
>>Then, I think I had a good day! That\'s all. :)
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