Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s natural to focus on work, but I think it\'s good to give themself the opportunity to develop themself.
Also I think that they should create a sense of accomplishment in what they do.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Also I think that they should create a sense of accomplishment in what they do.
Whoa! I guess you have a lot of free time today. Thank you for taking time answering your homework.
I will say this again, Give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime.”
Enjoy the rest of the day!
T. Aki~
It\'s natural to focus on work, but I think it\'s good to give themself the opportunity to develop themself.
>>> CORRECT!
Also I think that they should create a sense of accomplishment in what they do.
>>> CORRECT!
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