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Q: What distracts you while doing your homework?
A: I think usually some noises or some thoughts.
If there is noise outside, that makes me unable to concentrate on the homework, and also my thoughts do the same thing.
Also, if I do my homework for so long, it also keeps me from concentrating.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If there is noise outside, that makes me unable to concentrate on the homework, and also my thoughts do the same thing.
3. Also, if I do my homework for so long, it also keeps me from concentrating.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I think usually some noises or some thoughts.
>>I think they\'re usually some noises or some thoughts.
2. If there is noise outside, that makes me unable to concentrate on the homework, and also my thoughts do the same thing.
>>If there is noise outside, I couldn\'t concentrate on the homework, and my thoughts also do the same thing.
3. Also, if I do my homework for so long, it also keeps me from concentrating.
>>CORRECT!
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