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I think parents have to teach their children many their experience and help their children to find right goal or career.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
Absolutely! Parents play this vital role in their children\'s lives.
~ Teacher Maxine
I think parents have to teach their children many their experience and help their children to find right goal or career.
>> I think parents should share their experiences with their children and help them find the right goals or careers.
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