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Sometimes a leader has to hide something, but rather than trying to hide it at all costs, it is better not to do something that would cause a loss of trust.
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Good morning, [이름]!
I would agree with you, unless it does not involve the future of the company, a leader must try to hide their weaknesses especially from his subordinates because this can be a reason that they would lose their trust in his ability and skill.
Have a great day!
Aki~
Sometimes a leader has to hide something, but rather than trying to hide it at all costs, it is better not to do something that would cause a loss of trust.
>>> CORRECT!
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