Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Clean my house is my daily routine just like a habit. I do it every morning and evening. Monday, Wednesday and Friday wake up at 5:20 am and start my daily life by pressing the start button of the washing machine. After breakfast I clean the living room and the room with a wet towel. Tuesdays and Thursdays wake up at 7 o\'clock press the start button of the washing machine and start the morning.
There are three women in my house so our hair falls a lot on the floor. even Marong is a female. After dinner do th dishes and finish cleaning the floor, then it is my break time.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mia! ^^ I am impressed of your cleaning schedule! ^^ Indeed, you are a very organized person.
-Khai
Clean my house is my daily routine just like a habit.
>> Cleaning my house is my daily routine, just like a habit.
I do it every morning and evening.
>> CORRECT
Monday, Wednesday and Friday wake up at 5:20 am and start my daily life by pressing the start button of the washing machine.
>> On Monday, Wednesday, and Friday, I wake up at 5:20 am and start my daily life by pressing the “Start” button of the washing machine.
After breakfast I clean the living room and the room with a wet towel.
>> After breakfast, I clean the living room and the room with a wet towel.
Tuesdays and Thursdays wake up at 7 o\'clock press the start button of the washing machine and start the morning.
>> On Tuesdays and Thursdays, I wake up at 7 o\'clock, press the “Start” button of the washing machine and start the morning.
There are three women in my house so our hair falls a lot on the floor.
There are three women in my house so our hair falls a lot on the floor.
>> There are three women in my house, so our hair falls a lot on the floor.
even Marong is a female.
>> Even Marong is a female.
After dinner do th dishes and finish cleaning the floor, then it is my break time.
>> After dinner, I do the dishes and finish cleaning the floor. Then it is my break time.
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