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Our government guarantees the our purity of water.
But most people don’t drink tap water.
I believe our purification technology.
But the water have to through the many course untill I drink.
The pipe of water could be rusty and dirty.
Most of all I can’t believe my apartment’s water thank on the top of the apartment.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
Thank you for this. With the growing population, the government is responsible for ensuring the potability of our water.
Thank you for sharing this!
see you!
T. Aki~
Our government guarantees the our purity of water.
>>> Our government guarantees the purity of our water.
But most people don’t drink tap water.
>>> CORRECT!
I believe our purification technology.
>>> I believe in our purification technology
But the water have to through the many course untill I drink.
>>> But the water that we have though it passes through many courses before we drink,
The pipe of water could be rusty and dirty.
>>> CORRECT!
Most of all I can’t believe my apartment’s water thank on the top of the apartment.
>>> Most of all, I don\'t believe the water tank on top of my apartment.
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