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I think at least 12 ages kid can have cell phone, because cell phone make kids bad eyes and don\'t do many thinking and don\'t do other activities.
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Hello, Henry!
I totally get your point about kids and cell phones! It\'s a tricky balance, right? Some folks think it\'s cool for learning, while others worry about screen time. Anyhow, good job on this.
~ Teacher Maxine
I think at least 12 ages kid can have cell phone, because cell phone make kids bad eyes and don\'t do many thinking and don\'t do other activities.
>> I think at least 12-year-old kids can have a cell phone because cell phones make kids have bad eyes, don\'t do much thinking, and don\'t do other activities.
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