Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What do you think causes obesity?
A: I think eating too much or exercising too little causes obesity.
I think obesity occurs when a person too fat, and that\'s a result of eating too much and not exercising properly or enough.
I think it\'s not that easy to get rid of obesity, but I think it\'s still possible.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I think obesity occurs when a person too fat, and that\'s a result of eating too much and not exercising properly or enough.
3. I think it\'s not that easy to get rid of obesity, but I think it\'s still possible.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina
Here are some corrections:
1. I think eating too much or exercising too little causes obesity.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think obesity occurs when a person too fat, and that\'s a result of eating too much and not exercising properly or enough.
>>Obesity occurs when a person is too fat, and that\'s a result of eating too much and not exercising properly or enough.
3. I think it\'s not that easy to get rid of obesity, but I think it\'s still possible.
>>CORRECT!
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