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People whe litter should be fined. Otherwise, they will throw it away without permission. However, it is not easy to report a person who throws away trash by taking a picture. Here, garbage should be thrown in a designated place, and general garbage . Should be bought and thrown away in a designated bag. Recycling garbage such as cans, plastic, paper and milk packs are separated and thrown away. There is a fine of 200,000 won if you don\'t throw away general trash in a standard bag.
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Hi Mia! Thank you for writing your answer. I agree that it is not easy to report a person who throws away trash. You\'ve stated your opinion well. ^^
-Khai
People whe litter should be fined.
>> People who litter should be fined.
Otherwise, they will throw it away without permission.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Otherwise, they will throw it away mindlessly.
However, it is not easy to report a person who throws away trash by taking a picture.
>> CORRECT
Here, garbage should be thrown in a designated place, and general garbage . Should be bought and thrown away in a designated bag.
>> Here, garbage should be thrown in a designated place, and general garbage should be brought and thrown away in a designated bag.
Recycling garbage such as cans, plastic, paper and milk packs are separated and thrown away.
>> Recycling garbage such as cans, plastic, paper, and milk packs is separated and thrown away.
There is a fine of 200,000 won if you don\'t throw away general trash in a standard bag.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> There is a fine of 200,000 won if you don\'t throw away the general trash in a standard bag.
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