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If all country of people use the one language.
The world make more progress.
People don’t need to waste of time to study foreign languags.
They could spend more time on study for technology.
And also people can go abroad easily.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Ms. [이름]ny!
There was a story from the bible that talks about having one language. These people planned to create a very high tower to reach God, so in the end, God confused them by having a different language and they couldn\'t continue their plan.
Think about this. Thank you for giving your answers :) By the way, please take note of your spelling when you are writing.
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T. Aki~
If all country of people use the one language.
>>> If all country of people use one language.
The world make more progress.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> The world can become more progressive.
People don’t need to waste of time to study foreign languags.
>>> People don’t need to waste time studying foreign languages.
They could spend more time on study for technology.
>>> CORRECT!
And also people can go abroad easily.
>>> CORRECT!
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