Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR 01/23:
Writing Task: Do you think children should be encouraged to specialize in one sport from a young age? Why or why not?
Yes I think so. The reason why they can build friendship, improve self esteem, boost brain power and learn respect . There are much more reasons I guess.
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Good morning, [이름]!
I believe, sports help in improving the physical, mental, and social well-being. Parents should encourage their kids to take up any kind of sports that is most suited to them in terms of their interest level. By engaging in physical activities, you can make your kid active both physically and mentally.
- Kristine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR 01/23:
Writing Task: Do you think children should be encouraged to specialize in one sport from a young age? Why or why not?
Yes I think so.
Writing Task: Do you think children should be encouraged to specialize in one sport from a young age? Why or why not?
Yes I think so.
>> Yes, I think so.
The reason why they can build friendship, improve self esteem, boost brain power and learn respect .
>> Here are the following reasons: they can build friendship, improve self esteem, boost brain power and learn respect .
There are much more reasons I guess.
>> I believe there are plenty of reasons why children should be encouraged to specialize in one sport from a young age.
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