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2012-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Karen: "Don't play football in the garden!" Karen told me not to play football in the garden. 2) Teacher: "Don't forget your homework!" The teacher reminded me not to forget my homework. 3) Mike: "Don't shout at Peter!" Mike told me not to shout at Peter. 4) Yvonne: "Don't talk to your neighbour!" Yvonne told me not to talk to my neighbour. 5) Denise: "Don't open the door!" Denise told me not to open the door. Today is my payday. I was happy for a minute. My salary grazed my account. Most of my money that I recieved today was withdrawn by my credit card bills and utility bills. I spent much money to buy somethings in the dutyfree shop on my Deamado trip. Now I became a beggar. I cannot help buying it. It was very cheap.But I bought unnecessary things right now. Some bills to charge to me still remains. I'm going to pay back my credit card bill for several months. I need a tight financing policy.In my think, To save money is only to study hard, no friend, no meeting

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Hello Miss. [Name].. Two thumbs up for a very good job my dear.. And about your salary my dear..Just try to save some for the future.. It\'s for your own sake my edar Miss. [Name].. Talk to you again later Miss. [Name].. Can\'t wait to talk to you again..:D Teacher Cam^^ 1) Karen: \"Don\'t play football in the garden!\" Karen told me not to play football in the garden. >>correct2) Teacher: \"Don\'t forget your homework!\" The teacher reminded me not to forget my homework. >>correct3) Mike: \"Don\'t shout at Peter!\" Mike told me not to shout at Peter. >>correct4) Yvonne: \"Don\'t talk to your neighbour!\" Yvonne told me not to talk to my neighbour. >>correct5) Denise: \"Don\'t open the door!\" Denise told me not to open the door.>>correctToday is my payday. I was happy for a minute. >>correctMy salary grazed my account. >>correctMost of my money that I recieved today was withdrawn by my credit card bills and utility bills. >>correctI spent much money to buy somethings in the dutyfree shop on my Deamado trip. >>correctNow I became a beggar. >>correct >>Now I\'m a beggar.I cannot help buying it. It was very cheap.But I bought unnecessary things right now. >>correctSome bills to charge to me still remains. >>There are still some bills charged to me.I\'m going to pay back my credit card bill for several months. >>correctI need a tight financing policy. >>correct In my think, To save money is only to study hard, no friend, no meeting >>In my opinion, to save money is only to study hard. I\'m not gonna meet my friends this time, no appontments, no anything..^^

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