homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Karen: "Don't play football in the garden!" Karen told me not to play football in the garden.
2) Teacher: "Don't forget your homework!" The teacher reminded me not to forget my homework.
3) Mike: "Don't shout at Peter!" Mike told me not to shout at Peter.
4) Yvonne: "Don't talk to your neighbour!" Yvonne told me not to talk to my neighbour.
5) Denise: "Don't open the door!" Denise told me not to open the door.
Today is my payday. I was happy for a minute.
My salary grazed my account.
Most of my money that I recieved today was withdrawn by my credit card bills and utility bills.
I spent much money to buy somethings in the dutyfree shop on my Deamado trip.
Now I became a beggar.
I cannot help buying it. It was very cheap.But I bought unnecessary things right now.
Some bills to charge to me still remains.
I'm going to pay back my credit card bill for several months.
I need a tight financing policy.In my think, To save money is only to study hard, no friend, no meeting
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]..
Two thumbs up for a very good job my dear..
And about your salary my dear..Just try to save some for the future.. It\'s for your own sake my edar Miss. [Name]..
Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..
Can\'t wait to talk to you again..:D
Teacher Cam^^
1) Karen: \"Don\'t play football in the garden!\" Karen told me not to play football in the garden.
>>correct2) Teacher: \"Don\'t forget your homework!\" The teacher reminded me not to forget my homework.
>>correct3) Mike: \"Don\'t shout at Peter!\" Mike told me not to shout at Peter.
>>correct4) Yvonne: \"Don\'t talk to your neighbour!\" Yvonne told me not to talk to my neighbour.
>>correct5) Denise: \"Don\'t open the door!\" Denise told me not to open the door.>>correctToday is my payday. I was happy for a minute.
>>correctMy salary grazed my account.
>>correctMost of my money that I recieved today was withdrawn by my credit card bills and utility bills.
>>correctI spent much money to buy somethings in the dutyfree shop on my Deamado trip.
>>correctNow I became a beggar.
>>correct
>>Now I\'m a beggar.I cannot help buying it. It was very cheap.But I bought unnecessary things right now.
>>correctSome bills to charge to me still remains.
>>There are still some bills charged to me.I\'m going to pay back my credit card bill for several months.
>>correctI need a tight financing policy.
>>correct
In my think, To save money is only to study hard, no friend, no meeting
>>In my opinion, to save money is only to study hard. I\'m not gonna meet my friends this time, no appontments, no anything..^^
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