Homework
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A clean environment is important for maintaining health.. Cleanliness can prevent the transmission of infection. Bacteria and diseases can spread through dust and unsanitary environments. Washing your hands before cooking and washing your hands after going to the bethroom is important for preventing infection. Living in clean environment can reduce stress and make you feel happy. Clutter and dirty conditions can lead to stress and anxiety. this can have negative impact on mental health.
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Well done providing the importance of cleanliness in our health, Mia! Thank you for writing your homework. Keep it up! ^^
-Khai
A clean environment is important for maintaining health..
>> A clean environment is important for maintaining health.
Cleanliness can prevent the transmission of infection.
>> Cleanliness can prevent the transmission of infections.
OR
>> Cleanliness can prevent the transmission of an infection.
Bacteria and diseases can spread through dust and unsanitary environments.
>> CORRECT
Washing your hands before cooking and washing your hands after going to the bethroom is important for preventing infection.
>> Washing your hands before cooking and after going to the bathroom is important for preventing infection.
Living in clean environment can reduce stress and make you feel happy.
>> Living in a clean environment can reduce stress and make you feel happy.
Clutter and dirty conditions can lead to stress and anxiety.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Clutter and dirty conditions can be a cause of stress and anxiety.
this can have negative impact on mental health.
>> This can have a negative impact on mental health.
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