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Gimhae is a good place to live in Korea.
Gomhae is not a big problem to live in after all after all my life.
And Korea is good to live everywhere.
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Which city in Korea do you think is the best place to live in?
Gimhae is a good place to live in Korea.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I\'d choose Gimhae as the best place to live in my country.
Gomhae is not a big problem to live in after all after all my life.
>> I\'ve been living in Gimhae all my life and I know that there aren\'t big problems that happened here.
And Korea is good to live everywhere.
>> And everywhere in Korea is a good place to live in.
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