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For children play games help them grow. Because it is a time for children to develop themselves through various play experiences. Children can naturally express their feelings through play games. They can set their own rules through games and the process of following those rules is good for social development. Children can realize for themselves through trial and error through play games.
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You have given a very good answer, Mia! ^^ I agree that playing games will benefit the social development of the children.
-Khai
For children play games help them grow.
>> Playing games helps children grow.
Because it is a time for children to develop themselves through various play experiences.
>> It is because it is a time for children to develop themselves through various play experiences.
Children can naturally express their feelings through play games.
>> Children can naturally express their feelings through playing games.
They can set their own rules through games and the process of following those rules is good for social development.
>> They can set their own rules through games, and the process of following those rules is good for social development.
Children can realize for themselves through trial and error through play games.
>> Children can make realizations through trial and error by playing games.
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