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학생이 쓴 원문
I started speaking English in front of other students before 2 years ago.
I got stressed a lot at first.
I was conscious of their gaze.
After attending the class Power English.
I am not shy gradually.
Because foreign teacher is more uncomfortable existence than Korean teacher and its students.
So I don’t care about other’s thoughts now.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Ms. [이름]ny!
It makes me happy to hear that you feel comfortable using the english language. Always find opportunitties where you can use this (English) to establish fluency. Have a gdo day!
Aki~
I started speaking English in front of other students before 2 years ago.
>>>I started speaking English in front of other students before 2 years ago.
I got stressed a lot at first.
>>> CORRECT!
I was conscious of their gaze.
>>> CORRECT!
After attending the class Power English.
>>> After attending the class at Power English.
>>> After I attend classes at Power English.
I am not shy gradually.
>>> I am gradually not feeling shy.
Because foreign teacher is more uncomfortable existence than Korean teacher and its students.
>>> Because the presence of the foreign teacher is more uncomfortable than the Korean teacher and its students.
So I don’t care about other’s thoughts now.
>>> CORRECT!
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