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Q: Why do some people decide to become vegetarians?
A: I think it\'s because they think that eating vegetable can make them healthier.
I think it\'s actually true, but sometimes people need some nutrients in the meat, so I think it\'s not actually a good idea.
But some people who wants to diet, it might be a good choice to be a vegetarian.
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2. I think it\'s actually true, but sometimes people need some nutrients in the meat, so I think it\'s not actually a good idea.
3. But some people who wants to diet, it might be a good choice to be a vegetarian.
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Here are some corrections:
1. I think it\'s because they think that eating vegetable can make them healthier.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think it\'s actually true, but sometimes people need some nutrients in the meat, so I think it\'s not actually a good idea.
>>I think it\'s true, but sometimes people need some nutrients from meat, so it\'s not actually a good idea.
3. But some people who wants to diet, it might be a good choice to be a vegetarian.
>>However, for some people who want to go on a diet, it might be a good choice to be a vegetarian.
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