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The game I want to challenge is speed game. It is a game that I saw on a TV show 20 years ago. Game the way is count money and get the question right. For example, if you get more than seven questions right count more than fifty pieces of money and get it right you take the money. You have to get the questions right and count the money within the time limit. If is a game that you can play well if you have a good meory. I sometimes ask again what I just heard these day and my memory is worse than before. Speed games will be a challenge for my memory.
강사 첨삭
I have a poor memory too, Mia. And yes, \"Speed Games\" will be a good practice for our brains to improve. ^^
-Khai
The game I want to challenge is speed game.
>> The most challenging game for me is the “Speed Game”.
It is a game that I saw on a TV show 20 years ago.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> It was a TV show 20 years ago.
Game the way is count money and get the question right.
>> The rule of the game is to count the money and get the question right.
For example, if you get more than seven questions right count more than fifty pieces of money and get it right you take the money.
>> For example, if you get more than seven questions right, count more than fifty pieces of money, and get it right, you take the money.
You have to get the questions right and count the money within the time limit.
>> CORRECT
OR
You have to answer the questions correctly and count the money within the time limit.
If is a game that you can play well if you have a good meory.
>> It is a game that you can play well if you have a good memory.
I sometimes ask again what I just heard these day and my memory is worse than before.
>> These days, I sometimes ask again what I just heard. My memory is worse than it was before.
Speed games will be a challenge for my memory.
>> CORRECT
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