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Last year was filled up me with new things.
I waited for resolve to time,
I recognized of obsession myself,
I had relax time, show one’s personality as it is,
I felt interesting conversation with peoples,
I found new hobby, so I could grow up my self-esteems.
I think peoples are not all for me but I can’t fix about that sentence.
I wanted find how i am myself, last year made me.
I had a lot of experience in last year
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I waited for resolve to time,
I recognized of obsession myself,
I had relax time, show one’s personality as it is,
I felt interesting conversation with peoples,
I found new hobby, so I could grow up my self-esteems.
I think peoples are not all for me but I can’t fix about that sentence.
I wanted find how i am myself, last year made me.
I had a lot of experience in last year
Last year was filled up me with new things.
>>Last year was filled with new things for me.
I waited for resolve to time,
>>I waited for time to resolve it.
I recognized of obsession myself,
>> I recognized my own obsession.
I had relax time, show one’s personality as it is,
>>I had relaxation time to show my personality as it truly is.
I felt interesting conversation with peoples,
>> I had interesting conversations with people.
I found new hobby, so I could grow up my self-esteems.
>>I found a new hobby, which helped me boost my self-esteem.
I think peoples are not all for me but I can’t fix about that sentence.
>>I think not everyone is for me, but I can\'t do anything about that.
I wanted find how i am myself, last year made me.
>>I wanted to find out who I am; last year helped me discover myself.
I had a lot of experience in last year
>>CORRECT
OR >> I gained a lot of experience last year.
OR >> I gained a lot of experience last year.
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