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I had breakfast in Guam 15 years ago. I had breakfast at the hotel. The king crab and small pieces of bread I ate in Guam were delicious. It was amazing because the size of the king crab was huge and the portion was generous. All the bread types were delicious there. I met a lot of Koreans there because it was a package trip. There was kimchi that I eat every day at home, rice and soup.
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You have shared a very memorable breakfast experience, Mia. Very good! ^^ I hope to also visit Guam in the future.
-Khai
I had breakfast in Guam 15 years ago.
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>> 15 years ago, I had breakfast in Guam.
I had breakfast at the hotel.
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The king crab and small pieces of bread I ate in Guam were delicious.
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>> I ate a delicious king crab and some bread in Guam.
It was amazing because the size of the king crab was huge and the portion was generous.
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>> It was delectable because the king crab was huge and the portion was generous.
All the bread types were delicious there.
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>> All kinds of bread were delicious.
I met a lot of Koreans there because it was a package trip.
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>> I met a lot of Koreans because I availed of the package trip.
There was kimchi that I eat every day at home, rice and soup.
>> There was kimchi, rice, and soup, which I ate every day.
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