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To help other people is be admirable.
But they also could have helped poor people that you don’t know them.
Giving is more happier than receiving.
Because that situation is afford to help others,financially and emotionally.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
Doing good things bounces back to you. Don\'t get tired of doing these things to people. Have a good day!
Aki~
To help other people is be admirable.
>>>To help other people is be admirable.
>>> Helping people is admirable
But they also could have helped poor people that you don’t know them.
>>> Because they also could have helped poor people who don’t know them.
Giving is more happier than receiving.
>>> Giving is muchhappier than receiving.
Because that situation is afford to help others,financially and emotionally.
>>> Because that situationcan afford to help others, financially and emotionally.
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