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My most fun trip abroad was going to Japan when I was in first grade.
It was fun to buy a music box in Japan.
It was fun because it snowed a lot in Japan.
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Write about the most fun trip you had abroad.
My most fun trip abroad was going to Japan when I was in first grade.
>> OR: My Japan trip when I was in first grade was probably my most fun trip abroad.
It was fun to buy a music box in Japan.
>> OR: I had tons of fun shopping for a music box.
It was fun because it snowed a lot in Japan.
>> OR: I enjoyed that time because it was snowing heavily during my stay in the country.
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