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2024-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

학생이 쓴 원문

It\'s a very trivial routine that makes me smil today. First, a cup of hot coffee in the morning makes me happy and smile. Second, it makes me smile when I see my family picture on the frame. I don\'t like taking pictures very much but when I see picture after a while it become a good memory. Third, lunch time makes me smile. Four, it makes me smile when I chat with my friend on the phone.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing the things that you made you smile, Mia. There are a lot of things that make us happy and make us smile. ^^

-Khai

It\'s a very trivial routine that makes me smil today.

>> My daily routine made me smile today.
First, a cup of hot coffee in the morning makes me happy and smile.

>> First, a cup of hot coffee in the morning makes me happy and makes me smile.
Second, it makes me smile when I see my family picture on the frame.

>> CORRECT
OR
>> Second, it makes me smile when I see my family picture displayed on the frame.

I don\'t like taking pictures very much but when I see picture after a while it become a good memory.

>> I don\'t like taking pictures very much, but when I see a picture after a while, it becomes a good memory.
Third, lunch time makes me smile.

>> CORRECT
Four, it makes me smile when I chat with my friend on the phone.

>> Fourth, it makes me smile when I chat with my friend on the phone.

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