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We usually have cookies as a snack here. We also eat while watching TV or movie at home. We eat cookies on Christmas, and it is common in our daily lives even though it is not a holiday or a special day. I always have cookies in my house. When I drink beer, I eat cookies and fruits. Koreans especially eat beer and chicken together. In Korea, when there is a soccer game, people order beer and chicken from door to door.
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I think it is fun to watch a soccer game while having beer and chicken! ^^ Thank you for sharing, Mia!
-Khai
We usually have cookies as a snack here.
>> CORRECT
We also eat while watching TV or movie at home.
>> We also eat while watching TV or movies at home.
We eat cookies on Christmas, and it is common in our daily lives even though it is not a holiday or a special day. \\
>> CORRECT
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>> We eat cookies on Christmas, and we eat them even on ordinary days too.
I always have cookies in my house.
>> I always store cookies in my house.
When I drink beer, I eat cookies and fruits.
>> CORRECT
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>> When I drink beer, I usually pair it with cookies and fruits.
Koreans especially eat beer and chicken together.
>> Koreans usually eat beer and chicken together.
In Korea, when there is a soccer game, people order beer and chicken from door to door.
>> Whenever there is a soccer game in Korea, people order beer and chicken and have them delivered to their homes.
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