Homework
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Q: What do you think about letting university students wear school uniforms?
A: I think it would be alright if they like to.
I think there\'s actually a lot of advantages of school uniforms, and one of them is it\'s convenient to choose when they dress up.
Also, usually university\'s uniform\'s designs are good, so I think it would be not bad to wear them.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think there\'s actually a lot of advantages of school uniforms, and one of them is it\'s convenient to choose when they dress up.
3. Also, usually university\'s uniform\'s designs are good, so I think it would be not bad to wear them.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think it would be alright if they like to.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think there\'s actually a lot of advantages of school uniforms, and one of them is it\'s convenient to choose when they dress up.
>>I think there are actually a lot of advantages in wearing school uniforms; one of them is its convenience to choose whenever they dress up.
3. Also, usually university\'s uniform\'s designs are good, so I think it would be not bad to wear them.
>>Also, usually university\'s uniform\'s designs are good, so I think it would not be bad to wear them.
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