homework
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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \"Is having a healthy diet important for you? Why or why not? ”
It is important having a healthy diet.
That is because it can change the constitution.
Bad diet can also ruin our health.
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It is important having a healthy diet.
>> Yes, it is important to have a healthy diet.
That is because it can change the constitution.
>> It can change the condition of our body.
Bad diet can also ruin our health.
>> A bad diet can also ruin our health.
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