Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
As the world changes, Korean traditional culture also changes among [이름] people. These days, traditional culture is disappearing for [이름] people, but I think older generations should make efforts to make [이름] people interested in our country. Personally, I think Korean traditional culture is beautiful and precious. Hanbok, a traditional Korean costume, is beautiful. And [이름] people like it, too.
Korean traditional foods such as kimchi, bulgogi, and bibimbap are popular with [이름] people.
강사 첨삭
Very good! You\'ve shared how [이름] people feel about traditions, Mia! ^^ You\'ve written your sentences well. Happy Friday!Korean traditional foods such as kimchi, bulgogi, and bibimbap are popular with [이름] people.
-Khai
As the world changes, Korean traditional culture also changes among [이름] people. T
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Korean traditional culture also changes among [이름] people as the world changes.
These days, traditional culture is disappearing for [이름] people, but I think older generations should make efforts to make [이름] people interested in our country.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> These days, traditional culture is less popular with [이름] people, and I think that the older generation should initiate making them interested in it.
Personally, I think Korean traditional culture is beautiful and precious.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> In my opinion, I believe that Korean traditional culture is beautiful and precious.
Hanbok, a traditional Korean costume, is beautiful.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> One example is Hanbok. It is a beautiful traditional Korean costume.
And [이름] people like it, too.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> [이름] people appreciate the beauty of Hanbok.
>> CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.