Homework
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Q: Why are friends necessary in a person\'s life?
A: I think it\'s because people are born to be with each other.
I think humans could survive through all the tough times because they stuck together and make a social when they had some trouble.
So a person would probably feel very lonely when he\'s alone.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think humans could survive through all the tough times because they stuck together and make a social when they had some trouble.
3. So a person would probably feel very lonely when he\'s alone.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think it\'s because people are born to be with each other.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think humans could survive through all the tough times because they stuck together and make a social when they had some trouble.
>>I think humans could survive through all the tough times because they stuck together and socialized when they had some trouble.
3. So a person would probably feel very lonely when he\'s alone.
>>A person would probably feel very lonely when he\'s alone.
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