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2024-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I like to spend the weekend at home. Sometimes I go out and play with my friend. I also play board games and cell phone.

Here\'s your last corrected composition for this week, Luna!

Many thanks for sending it. Have fun at your slumber party and a happy weekend to you.

See you next week!

Cheers,

Jean~~

Write about your usual weekend. Write as many details as you can.

I like to spend the weekend at home.

>> OR: I prefer to stay at home on weekends.

Sometimes I go out and play with my friend.

>> I sometimes go out and hang out with my friends.

I also play board games and cell phone.

>> I also play board games and browse through my cell phone.

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