homework
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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \"Do you believe shopping can relieve stress? Why or why not? ”
Yes, I believe shopping can relieve stress. This is because I feel good when I buy something I like.
It will make me happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jessica!
Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!
Please continue writing your homework for faster improvements. :)
YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-T.NIKKI ^^
Yes, I believe shopping can relieve stress. This is because I feel good when I buy something I like. It will make me happy.
>> Yes, I believe that shopping can relieve stress because I feel good and happy when I buy something I like.
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