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2024-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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It is not easy to enjoy studying. Perhaps studying was not fun because I thought the purpose of studying was to do well on the test. When I was [이름] I had an experience of being interested in studying because the teacher\'s teaching method was interesting. It was a history subject, but the teacher always talked about her thoughts and experiences when teaching history. So I looked forward to the history class every time.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing a very interesting experience while studying, Mia. ^^ Indeed, it is exciting to hear the teacher\'s thought and experiences. Very good! 
It is not easy to enjoy studying.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Many people might not find studying to be easy.

Perhaps studying was not fun because I thought the purpose of studying was to do well on the test.

>> CORRECT

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>> Perhaps studying was not fun because I thought the purpose of studying was to get high scores on tests.

When I was [이름] I had an experience of being interested in studying because the teacher\'s teaching method was interesting.
>> When I was [이름], I was interested in studying a subject because the teacher\'s teaching method was interesting.
It was a history subject, but the teacher always talked about her thoughts and experiences when teaching history. 
>> It was History subject. The teacher always talked about her thoughts and experiences when teaching history.
So I looked forward to the history class every time.

>> CORRECT

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>> So I always looked forward to our history class.


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