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My mom worked for 25 years. I liked it when she was at home because she was always busy working. She worked in a Walkerhill Japanese kitchen. She work on rotation with each team taking a different shift. If she go to work at 5am, she came home at 3pm and when she go to work at 12pm, she came home at 11pm. I spent a lot of time alone I came home from school. I liked it when she was home before me after school.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your personal experience, Mia. ^^ My mom was also busy when I was a child, so I know how you felt. ^^
-Khai
My mom worked for 25 years.
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I liked it when she was at home because she was always busy working.
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>> I like it when she’s at home because she’s always busy working.
She worked in a Walkerhill Japanese kitchen.
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>> Her workplace is Walkerhill Japanese Kitchen.
She work on rotation with each team taking a different shift.
>> She worked in rotation with each team taking a different shift.
If she go to work at 5am, she came home at 3pm and when she go to work at 12pm, she came home at 11pm.
>> If she goes to work at 5 a.m., she comes home at 3 p.m., and when she goes to work at 12 p.m., she comes home at 11 p.m.
I spent a lot of time alone I came home from school.
>> I spent a lot of time alone when I came home from school.
I liked it when she was home before me after school.
>> CORRECT
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>> I like it when she’s at home when I come back from school.
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