Homework
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Q: What is the most interesting part of Korea\'s history?
A: I think it\'s when Japan invaded our country a long time a go.
Because the king was running away from Japan to survive, and the people and some brave generals avoided Japan from defeating Korea.
I think it\'s the most interesting part because there are a lot of well-known wars during that period.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Because the king was running away from Japan to survive, and the people and some brave generals avoided Japan from defeating Korea.
3. I think it\'s the most interesting part because there are a lot of well-known wars during that period.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
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1. I think it\'s when Japan invaded our country a long time a go.
>>I think it\'s when Japan invaded our country a long time ago.
2. Because the king was running away from Japan to survive, and the people and some brave generals avoided Japan from defeating Korea.
>>It is because the king was running away from Japan to survive, and the people and some brave generals stopped Japan from defeating Korea.
3. I think it\'s the most interesting part because there are a lot of well-known wars during that period.
>>I think it\'s the most interesting part because there were a lot of well-known wars during that period.
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