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학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m more annoyed about being trapped in the rain without an umbrella because I can buy it next time if I don\'t have money, but being stuck in the rain is annoying even if it\'s rained and it\'s annoying to wait.
강사 첨삭
Your essay captures the frustration of getting caught in the rain without an umbrella and highlights the inconvenience of waiting. Your perspective on the annoyance is well-expressed, making the reader empathize with your experiences. Keep up the good work in articulating your feelings, Eric!
~T.Harmony <3
>> I\'m more annoyed about being caught in the rain without an umbrella because I can buy one next time even if I don\'t have money. However, being stuck in the rain is frustrating, whether it\'s raining or waiting.
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