Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The name is very important. My parents believed that the person\'s fate could change depending on the name. So when you give birth to a child, you name it with a good meaning. Do I want to change my name? The answer is no. I like my name. Because my name is normal, but my parents gave it to me.
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You were able to share your thoughts about names, Mia! Well done!
-Khai
The name is very important.
>> CORRECT
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>> A person’s name is very important.
My parents believed that the person\'s fate could change depending on the name.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> My parents believed that one’s name influenced his or her fate.
So when you give birth to a child, you name it with a good meaning.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> So it is important to give your child a name with a meaningful meaning.
Do I want to change my name?
>> CORRECT
The answer is no.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> My answer is no.
I like my name.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> I treasure my name.
Because my name is normal, but my parents gave it to me.
>> It is because my name is special and my parents gave it to me.
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